Really good 😊 I replayed it and enjoyed it even more the second time around! 😁 Xou did a really good job with defining each character as they each feel like full - relatable - people, the comedy is well executed and kept me smiling, and the writing is just really pleasant to read 🙂 xou have a really good flow. Top dog marks!
One thing I would suggest would be to adjust the custom pointer xou have? I kept having problems navigating to save and change the settings because the cursor’s point isn’t on the index finger but sorta closer to the palm 🧐
Okay, this was so incredibly charming and lovely it got me instantly hooked, well done! Jerry is my baby boy and i would do antyhing to protect him. I got a question though, on the itch description it says it´s a +18 vn. Is that just because of language, or is imagery going to be adult oriented in the future?
we just want to have the artistic freedom to do stuff thats a little more sensual and explore some mature themes later on! (think of adult in an adult swim kinda way)
""ay parker give one philly chess steak sandwich, extra sand, tone down with the wich. Tryin to lose weight over here*chuckling slowly like an old man*"" (slaps your ass)
honestly? not sure! i think we might need someone with an android to test it out lol its my first time doing something in renpy so idk if its that hard to make an android port
OMGGGG qwq I'm actually so sad! I played it not realizing it wasn't finished. It's such a beautiful game, the characters and their designs are so neat! I can't wait to see how it ends and I'm def telling all my friends to play it!! xoxo <33
The art style is appealing, but some character design choices threw me off. Jerry, for instance, looks like a cartoon character mid–chicken pox. Cole is supposed to be a red panda, yet he’s yellow, and honestly, even if he were red, his design reads more feline than anything else.
There are some typos and grammatical issues throughout the demo, including awkward double negatives. Cole’s personality is intentionally grating, and while I get that the devs are leaning into that, it didn’t land for me; it felt more irritating than entertaining.
As of now, Jerry and Parker’s stories feel disconnected. There’s a moment where Cole bothers Parker, but that encounter isn’t acknowledged in Jerry’s route. As it stands, Parker and Jerry have no interaction at all. Most of Parker’s scenes are internal monologues or exchanges with unnamed, faceless characters, which makes his storyline feel especially uneventful.
The game’s tagline promises: “Follow the lives of Jerry Dalmond and Parker King, two students who cross paths at the beginning of the new term.” Ironically, they haven’t crossed paths yet.
I'm interested in seeing where this goes, but woof.
Stay tuned for chapter 1A! The downloadable version we have at the moment is just a really short side of it that we decided to release as a proof of concept.
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Loving the aesthetics of this VN, I need moree!!!!!
very cute. i love it
Extremely good VN so far.
Cole is amazingly cute, looking forward to more story content and red panda cuteness.
Really good 😊 I replayed it and enjoyed it even more the second time around! 😁 Xou did a really good job with defining each character as they each feel like full - relatable - people, the comedy is well executed and kept me smiling, and the writing is just really pleasant to read 🙂 xou have a really good flow. Top dog marks!
One thing I would suggest would be to adjust the custom pointer xou have? I kept having problems navigating to save and change the settings because the cursor’s point isn’t on the index finger but sorta closer to the palm 🧐
ohhh would you mind giving us a visual example?? id love to get that fixed
Not sure how I’d do that on wondoes as screenshots remove the mouse 🤔
LOVE IT ''`ｨ(´∀｀∩💛
Okay, this was so incredibly charming and lovely it got me instantly hooked, well done! Jerry is my baby boy and i would do antyhing to protect him.
I got a question though, on the itch description it says it´s a +18 vn. Is that just because of language, or is imagery going to be adult oriented in the future?
we just want to have the artistic freedom to do stuff thats a little more sensual and explore some mature themes later on! (think of adult in an adult swim kinda way)
is this yaoi?!
maybe...
""ay parker give one philly chess steak sandwich, extra sand, tone down with the wich. Tryin to lose weight over here*chuckling slowly like an old man*"" (slaps your ass)
wow!! nice game..
what a bad luck to have Android huh. hopefully i can enjoy this game soon.
Although, that would be a funny way of saying that you do not own a PC.
Just putting it out there.
are we getting an android version in the future?
honestly? not sure!
i think we might need someone with an android to test it out lol
its my first time doing something in renpy so idk if its that hard to make an android port
I wish I had a friend that was as crazy as Cole
He's so silly but also such a bro. He gives me "florida man" vibes too
He's actually from Delaware.....................................
is that that that one game by to"b"y fox
I just meant as in, the whole chaotic act, |Florida man is a meme, not him literally being from florida
NO I KNOW LOL he's def got florida man vibes i'll give you that
OMGGGG qwq I'm actually so sad! I played it not realizing it wasn't finished. It's such a beautiful game, the characters and their designs are so neat! I can't wait to see how it ends and I'm def telling all my friends to play it!! xoxo <33
(( keep up the awesome work!! :3 ))
Hey, thank you so much!!
And yes, we plan on releasing this in a chapter basis, but we really appreciate your excitement < 3
Already thought the april fools sprites were charming but the new ones are really good!! Jerry and Cole are great lol what a duo.
keep up the amazing work yall
the april fools sprites were ugly in their own charming way LOL
I love the characters! Cute sprites :3
wow!! nice game..
these sprites are absolute peak holy shit
thank you!! took us a lot of time to get em done LOL it was a little on and off
yo this is cool
get in my collection
am i allowed to say bad words or no
NO
ASS
this BETTER not be secretly another FUCKING angst game where they all like die horribly or something
One of them dies at the end of each chapter, with the final chapter taking place in hell.
The art style is appealing, but some character design choices threw me off. Jerry, for instance, looks like a cartoon character mid–chicken pox. Cole is supposed to be a red panda, yet he’s yellow, and honestly, even if he were red, his design reads more feline than anything else.
There are some typos and grammatical issues throughout the demo, including awkward double negatives. Cole’s personality is intentionally grating, and while I get that the devs are leaning into that, it didn’t land for me; it felt more irritating than entertaining.
As of now, Jerry and Parker’s stories feel disconnected. There’s a moment where Cole bothers Parker, but that encounter isn’t acknowledged in Jerry’s route. As it stands, Parker and Jerry have no interaction at all. Most of Parker’s scenes are internal monologues or exchanges with unnamed, faceless characters, which makes his storyline feel especially uneventful.
The game’s tagline promises: “Follow the lives of Jerry Dalmond and Parker King, two students who cross paths at the beginning of the new term.” Ironically, they haven’t crossed paths yet.
I'm interested in seeing where this goes, but woof.
Stay tuned for chapter 1A! The downloadable version we have at the moment is just a really short side of it that we decided to release as a proof of concept.
I hunger for more pls
Marry me Parker
This is so cute so far!!
I wonder if it will be available for Android.
I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes! I love the characters! Cute sprites :3
thanks! the sprites are only for this april fools build, the final style will be different
however, the script after the joke section IS part of the final game (but only a very tiny bit of chapter 1)
that fucking intro, had me dying
that is the 100% very real intro to the game.
for real though just finished the demo and definitely am excited, i absolutely loved the writing a shit ton and had me giggling the whole time